Hello 
Well, basically, I’m flying back to Vietnam in an Airbus A320.
After a 7 months journey in Singapore, it’s now time to get back home.
I don’t have much to say. Maybe I will end up saying that I am very happy and eager to go back home.
That seems quite obvious, so I would rather talk a bit about what I am going to do when I get back home.
First of all, I will spend sometimes (well, it might be greater than ‘sometimes’ ) to go and visit my old friends, ex-teachers and relatives. It might be tiring, I suppose, but on the other hand, it would be very fun and nice as well.
Then, of course, I must have sometimes to revise my knowledge and do my homework ( Oops, the plane is shaking hard… duh… quite scary… haha ), there are a lot to do and I would definitely not waste my time just for going out and playing. Moreover, to have such a long holiday, I must made a commitment with mr.siow that whether I do well for my CA2 and SA2 or else I will end up having a shorter December holiday than others. Once the word had been spoken, I must try my best to keep it.
(Well, the plane was going throw a bad weather area just now. It was very scary as the plane was shaking real hard, it even lose its height once and … well, I must admit that I was quite scared. It’s ok now, though)
Lastly, well, I think I am going to exercise regularly during this holiday, I want to get fitter and at least pass the NAFFA test in term 3, I failed a few tests and I think I could do better.
Well, that’s it, not too long and not too short. I’m ending this as my laptop’s battery is going to run out soon. It’s 18.27 in Singapore’s time and 5.27 in Vietnam’s time, I will be stepping on Vietnam in around 45 more minutes. I can’t wait to do that !
Have a nice holiday and see you soon.
Well Tank,
A nice short and focused entry- Just got back from overseas and am glad to see you have kept your word to keep writing.
As always, here are a few pointers:
1) the phrase ’sometime’ and ’some time’ is different in context. Can you give me an example of when to use each phrases in a short post after this?
2) Capitalise first names in your writings i.e. I’m Mr Siow, not mr siow. It is a very small but subtle difference.
-it is proper punctuation
-also, small caps for first names is acceptable in sms or online messaging as part of short-form but it is not acceptable in academic writing
3)Give me one more essay this week:
“Apart from the use of English in school, name ONE major difference between a Vietnamese student and a Singaporean student in 500 words”